online?† Okay I do understand Fowler's attempts to just fill this FAC with redundant talk (that's exactly what I was told he'd do, mess up the FAC to the point where his username is all over the place). † I hope these comments are helpful. Dimple Kapadia was born on 8 June 1957 in Bombay to late Gujarati businessman Chunibhai Kapadia and his wife Bitti "Betty" (1939–2019). My main concern is that it relies far too heavily on quotes. It's a pity you couldn't take snippets of the articles within them when accessing the sources to improve verification. Her maternal grandfather, Chunibhai, was infamously disowned by his father, Laljibhai—who had embraced Hinduism, but continued to regard the Agha Khan as his religious mentor—when he allowed his daughter, Dimple, to act in BobbyThe wealthy Khoja family, which embraced Hinduism only with Chunibhai's father, Laljibhai, and which accepts the Agha Khan as its religious mentor even now, disowned Dimple's father the day he agreed to Raj Kapoor's proposal to let her sign for Bobby.

4) The story follows how Bobby falls in love with Raj (Rishi), the son of a wealthy businessman, and how the two face the disapproval of their parents Rudaali [15] Saagar eventually premiered in August 1985 and was controversial for several scenes featuring Kapadia, including one in which she was seen topless for a split second.

The Indian Express." Chunibhai was from a wealthy Ismaili Khoja family, whose members had reportedly "embraced Hinduism" while still regarding Agha Khan as their religious mentor; Bitti was an Ismaili, too, and similarly followed Aga Khan.

The best sources are not included. Antareen And that there are concerns with some of the sourcing that are actionable. "Chunnibhai Kapadia was — and is — a maverick. Based on the significant improvements of the quote/prose issue and your hard work in addressing the problematic sources I don't see a strong reason currently to oppose. There remain errors in citing, paraphrasing, and synthesis. Huge claims like "For the next decade, she would go on to become one of the leading actresses in Hindi cinema." However, it does appear that there are significant concerns with the article that are being brought up. -- Her maternal grandfather, Chunibhai, was infamously disowned by his father, Laljibhai—who had embraced Hinduism, but continued to regard the Agha Khan as his religious mentor—when he allowed his daughter, Dimple, to act in The last of these is quoted in the section. "Here is a short prose review of the first four sentences of section 2.1: † Fowler can you find "Masood, Iqbal (10 January 1993). Some of the opposition seems to derive not from actual disenting sources but from reviewer's beliefs that something must be so without actually having a source to support the belief. But every claim and source does need to be rock solid for this to pass. We’d lie that we’d gone out shopping or to a friend’s house. has biographical value though I agree. I was very attached to my mother but I was scared of dad. In time, the Shia were sub-divided. And when she emerged nymph-like from the pool in a red bikini, Dimple, despite her puppy fat, had teenagers enthralled. It was life up there on the screen." Anil Kapoor Hindustan Times It was clear she was back. Subsequently, after two daughters and a divorce, and years spent away from the studio floors, she has fairly recently begun trying to revive her career.

There are many links, which is fine but some of them are duplicated. "After three years of near-frustration in my career, I bagged Mahesh Bhatt's film The earliest memories are generally older" - we base our articles on sources.. if the source does not specify which film it was, we indicate in our article that it is unclear which film is being referred to. 3) "While the film was to be Kapoor's son Rishi Kapoor's first leading role, Kapadia was given the title role of Bobby Braganza, a middle-class Goan Christian girl." The Tribune

Suggest you adjust some to use your own words and eliminate some others. And the next year, she gave birth to me. The institution of Imamat was to continue thereafter on a hereditary basis, succession being based on designation by the Imam of the Time. For the next decade, she would go on to become one of the leading actresses in Hindi cinema. "The edge of mediocrity".

[36] In the same year, she made a short appearance in Mahesh Bhatt's action thriller Kabzaa, a critical failure. I wanted to be Asha Parekh, like the girl she played, ... To me, movies were very real. "Mom would see a movie a day, making dad hopping mad. 1)Kapadia always had aspirations to become an actress when she was a child, calling herself "film-crazy". To demonstrate them, I have gone through just one paragraph in Section 1 of the article. And I found the link Blofeld. Her maternal grandfather, Chunibhai, was infamously disowned by his father, Laljibhai—who had embraced Hinduism, but continued to regard the Agha Khan as his religious mentor—when he allowed his daughter, Dimple, to act in BobbyThe wealthy Khoja family, which embraced Hinduism only with Chunibhai's father, Laljibhai, and which accepts the Agha Khan as its religious mentor even now, disowned Dimple's father the day he agreed to Raj Kapoor's proposal to let her sign for Bobby.Based on these sources, I've added the following sentence on the article: I could have written what needs to be said in less than half of that. 2) "She was introduced by Raj Kapoor in his 1973 teen romance Bobby. " The girl, Bobby, is from a working-class Christian family. Goa There is every likelihood, that the mother was Muslim and some likelihood that the father was as well. It was life up there on the screen." The article is broadly in good shape. [46] Rediff.com noted, "Dimple, caught between a friend and lover, performed solidly and memorably, grounding the two male leads and making the film work. But the class rivalry was only spice for a recipe that stressed breathless, obsessive juvenile love.

Her knotted polka-dotted blouse and earphone hairstyle were wildly emulated.I have examined the sources and inference in the Lead, sections 1, 2.1, 2.3, and 2.6 of First, please take your comments to your original section instead of messing up the FAC.

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